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Submission - LoganAsquer - 05-16-2016
Finally alone.
In my office, locked in from the inside.
It's late in the evening. No one will call, no one will come.
Finally I can dedicate myself to what I was thinking about from the morning.
Finally I can look at that photo again.
Finally I can admire that Foot that appeared to me today.
I stare at It, satisfied. The veins in my cock already pumping.
It is perfect, the Foot of a Goddess, I lower my underwear and start stroking my cock while admiring the photo.
It is divine in almost every detail.
The skin tone of an Egyptian Queen.
The slightly consumed heel of a lived Woman.
The astonishing perfection of the arch, like art from a Renaissance sculptor.
The toes, delicious in shape, length, and distance from one another.
My left hand slowly approaches my pulsing shaft.
But then something happens.
I sense a presence behind me, somehow someone is here with me.
…
It's You. I can feel it.
I'm paralyzed. I hold my breath. I don't know what to do.
I feel ashamed, guilty, excited.
Your soft breasts lay on my head. I let myself get drowned by them.
I suddenly feel relieved, my sins are forgiven.
Your left hand awakens me from my peace. You firmly grab my hair, pull them to make me stand up. From behind Your other hand comes in front of me. The index finger pointing the ground.
I understand.
I get on my knees.
You pass by, keep pulling my hair, and I start to follow You on all fours.
Finally I can see You.
Your blonde long hair drops on Your body, in a beautiful contrast with Your tanned skin.
A long black dress made of transparent silk ornate Your body. Your ass tight in that, mesmerizing me with every step.
Steps...
Finally my eyes catch them.
Bare feet, Your nails polished in black. I can already stare at Your perfection, as You make your way to the couch.
You sit down while You leave my hair.
I stay on my knees, in front of You.
You overlap your legs, making yourself comfortable.
Your right Foot now stands in front of me.
I can already taste Your skin.
I could reach it with my tongue.
And I want to.
But something stops me.
My eyes catch Your gaze.
Your stare is resolute, daring me to do something.
You start to make small movement with Your Foot. Left and right. Up and down.
My head naturally follows, without even having to think about it
I try to keep eye contact with You.
But this little dance of Yours starts to hypnotize me.
The smell of your sweat bursts into my limbs. And as it gets carried down there, my cock starts pulsing like rarely never before.
My eyes slowly start to close, as my mouth starts to open.
The tongue shyly comes out, as it almost reaches Your perfection.
…
I stop myself.
My breath is heavy.
My eyes, open wide, catch Yours again.
A small, satisfied smile paintedYour face.
I bend myself over, kneeling as far as I could. My front touching the floor.
I didn't have the permission to do anything.
It was a test, and I almost failed it.
I feel like an idiot, fearing the impression You could have gotten of me.
But my thoughts soon disappear.
Your Foot touches me.
You rub my head like you would rub a pet. And I'm suddenly relieved.
You move towards me, Your left hand grabs my hair, Your right one locks on my cheeks.
You bring my face beneath Yours. To a really close distance.
I look into your eyes. Excitement, grateful, obedience.
A small movement of Your fingers make me open my mouth.
You smile again, satisfied, as a flow of Your spit starts to descend.
My eyes grown bigger, anxious to prove my submission.
I extend my tongue to catch the spit falling down.
As I taste it, I swallow.
I swallow and I want more.
And more You give me.
The stream of spit keeps falling from Your mouth, and full of gratitude I take it.
I swallow slowly, being as loud as i can. Tasting every sip of this Divine nectar.
When You are done, You release me, and get back to Your position.
Your Foot in front of me, again.
But now it's different. Now I'm worthy.
You stop watching me, turning Your head sideways, getting even more relaxed on the couch.
Finally, the perfection of this Foot is waiting for me. My cock getting even harder, pushing upwards as he wants to reach It.
I immediately tend my hands to You.
One under Your legs, the other under the heel, to make You more comfortable.
I stare at It. From right to left, from top to bottom.
Seconds seem like minutes, minutes seem like hours.
I hesitate a little, I'm excited as ever, I'm shaking, my mind is going everywhere.
My thumb moveslittle upwards, and starts to gently rub the plant of Your Foot.
I get myself closer, putting my nose between Your toes.
I breathe.
I breathe and i feel satisfied. I am ready.
I move down a bit, and I start worshipping Your Foot.
Soft and big kisses of my lips start to give attention at Your heel.
I'm so grateful.
I adore Your Foot like It deserves.
Kissing It from the bottom, rising to the upper part.
I'm back at the heel again, and I finally get my tongue to work.
Warm and dense laps, from bottom to top. I'm slow, to ensure this moment will last forever.
I give particular attention to the arch, I follow It's rotation.
Even more at Your toes, licking the bottom part of each one, cleaning between each of those.
I feel everything in each lap. Your perfection, my submission. Your magnificence, my futility. Your taste, my excitement.
Some time passes, Your Foot shines wet as a sign of my job.
I move my hands under It, grabbing firmly the plant and giving small massages.
My mouth moves in front of Your big toe. I search Your eyes for approval, but You are not even looking, not even interested.
I open my mouth, and I gently take Your toe inside of it.
I give small sucks while my tongue works underneath.
Searching for Your approval I open my mouth again and take the second toe, repeating the process. I do that again, and again, and again.
All of Your toes stick in my mouth. I feel so ashamed of the situation, sucking Your Foot like a whore and You don't even give me a look. I get even more excited from this, and my cock starts to pump up and down.
My head starts bobbing a little, getting faster at every thrust.
Your Foot, barely fitting in my mouth, starts to disappear inside, as i accept half of it.
I suck hard as i can.
I make it sloppy, perverted such as I am.
I drool like a wildling, sucking at Your cock.
I moan like a bitch, eager for Your attention.
I close my eyes as I get myself into that. Drops of pre-cum appear on the head of my cock, as I feel humiliated like never before.
Then something happens.
The back of my head gets touched.
I open my eyes and see You staring at me.
A vibrator is tickling Your clit, as Your left Foot moves behind my head.
You start pushing me with It, leaning into each thrust.
My eyes, wide open, try to express my gratitude.
You start to dictate the movement of my blowjob, as the vibrator slips into You.
The thrusts get slower but deeper. Each time You keep me there a little more. My eyes start to water.
I start to struggle breathing as I hear Your moaning.
I start to gag and drool over as I reach my limit, while my tongue trying to caress Your plant.
You hold me there awhile, seems a beautiful eternity to me.
You let me go as I cough and spit on the floor. You give me a couple seconds, then Your Foot pushes me back again, making me worship the other one like it is the only thing that matters.
I lost the count on how many times you do that, I'm dizzy and close to passing out, but You are merciless.
Your breathing intensifies as Your hips start to move by themselves.
You begin to rub Your clit as you start to literally facefuck me with Your Feet.
Fast. Forcefully. Deeper.
I try to hold as i could to follow Your climax.
Being used like this makes my cock vibrate and pulse, I suck and moan as loud as I could to let You know that.
Thrusts after thrusts You eventually come to an end. Your moan satisfied as you exhale and lay Yourself on the couch.
Your Feet start to move slower and slower, till they stop.
I let go of the one inside my mouth like a dutiful dog with his bone.
Your Foot drips like hell, worshipped like rarely before.
I stare at It, until the vibrator coming out of You gets my interest. This one is also dripping, but with such a more rare juice. Eager to taste It, a chill thrills my body.
You bring a hand to my line of sight, giving me a negative sign with Your finger like you were almost reading my mind.
I look at You. Your face is beautiful, relaxed after the orgasm.
You smile, I blush. And bow my head a little.
You give me Your right Foot again, soaked with my spit.
You move It under my shaft, and You touch my balls with Your toes.
I understand Your thinking and I let myself loose, greedy to take my reward.
I firmly grab the back of Your legs, as my cock starts to stroke over Your Foot.
My balls are tense, holding my cum for more than I remember.
I start to fuck Your Foot like a rabid dog, while I lick and kiss Your thigh.
It didn't take much for me to cum like a teen. Sprouts of hot load all over Your Foot. As I moan and drool over Your leg.
I am done.
I am Yours.
I am submitted.
I close my eyes and lay myself down on the floor, placing my head at the Feet of my Mistress.
(random erotic script. I've got the inspiration to write it here on the forum, so here we are. I hope i don't make many mistakes and make it enjoyable).
RE: Submission - Simple Tania - 05-16-2016
Logan, great story, I love it!
RE: Submission - Tantrum - 05-17-2016
hey Logan, that's pretty good, it shows that you really enjoy it and if I may, I have a small foot fetish myself, so, I totally understood all of that! I hope you keep writing, I certainly want to read more stories from you. *thumbs up*
RE: Submission - _Barbie_ - 02-27-2017
Whoa....well done!
RE: Submission - LoganAsquer - 02-27-2017
That's necroposting
RE: Submission - Vrook - 02-27-2017
Shhh, bathe in the glory! Shh!
RE: Submission - Emmie - 02-27-2017
I think it's fine for artistic threads. As I'm sure there are people who haven't had a chance to read a lot of the works. ^^
RE: Submission - LoganAsquer - 02-27-2017
Yup, i was just joking
I'm glad if someone else appreciated it.
RE: Submission - -J- - 02-27-2017
(02-27-2017, 05:21 PM)LoganAsquer Wrote: That's necroposting
What the moosemod said -- I missed this the first time around somehow and it's really well-done.
RE: Submission - LoganAsquer - 02-28-2017
All hail Barbie then :p