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RE: Tales by the pond - Vrook - 02-02-2017
It would be polite to speak English, when posting into a general thread, like this one here. When you post in the separate threads, in the Big World section, you're free to talk in your native language.
Or, if you decide to post in your language, it would be nice to provide a sort of translation, so that the ones who don't speak that language, can get the idea behind your post.
RE: Tales by the pond - Mail - 02-02-2017
(02-02-2017, 06:21 PM)Vrook Wrote: It would be polite to speak English, when posting into a general thread, like this one here. When you post in the separate threads, in the Big World section, you're free to talk in your native language.
Or, if you decide to post in your language, it would be nice to provide a sort of translation, so that the ones who don't speak that language, can get the idea behind your post.
ok,i note that,sorry
RE: Tales by the pond - GuyByThePond - 02-02-2017
*taking the upper part of my nose and sighing heavily*
There was Cath. Now Mail. There fades my hope for this place to be peaceful.
*smiling a broad grin*
Thank you for your kind words ML. And thank you for the translation Cath, even if I wonder who is this Ivan. I'm no Russian tsar. The name's Ian.
And to soothe your cute heads : let's say I'm trying myself at something you could call erotic autofiction (*). All these stories never happened, except in my not so beautiful head. True, inspiration comes from people I've met in the MnF world, but writing this stuff is just a way for me to funnel dark, destructive energies that could hurt me and people I love IRL otherwise, hopefully creating something that has aesthetic value...
(*) A note from MrWiKi.
End of the 90's/Begining of the 00's. The apex of literary hype in France is:
- at my left, autofiction, with C. Angot, F. Beigbeder and G. Dustan as flagships
- at my right, the "EC" gang, writers capturing both the spirit of the ending millenium/the one to come : G. Dantec, C. Houellebecq and V. Ravalec
Except Nicolas Pages from G. Dustan.
This one really touched me, probably because the story had a real echo.
Dustan commited suicide in 2005, after stopping his literary activity to go back being a judge. At times, I think he did that because he never reconciled his 2 sides.
RE: Tales by the pond - GuyByThePond - 02-03-2017
A romance - Episode 3: contorno
"I'm going to give you a taste of your own medicine !"
You're disheveled. You've got red on your cheeks. You look horny and beautiful.
"Am I the mouse now love ?"
"You made me a hungry cat Ian. I want to taste your meat"
I'm sitting on the sofa. I still have my pants on. You go on the floor, on your knees. With your hands you massage my bulge. You open the button, you unzip the pants, make it slide along my legs. Your hands fly, eager. In my boxer, my shaft feels constricted, and hot. The tip of my glans appears (I'm cut). You put your mouth on it, sucking on it, twirling around my dick head with your tongue.
"You leaked Ian, and you still are. Eating my pussy excited you so much ?"
"This, and your mouth dear. I've been dreaming of this for so long"
"Then my blowjob will haunt your dreams forever".
You're smiling, easing my erect cock out of the boxer. You rub my pole, making yourself familiar with its width, its length, its hot throbbing pulse.
"Nice shaft, Ian"
"All yours dear"
You put it all in your mouth in one move, making me gasp. At first, you only use your tongue to make me feel good... Then you lock eyes with me, and start sucking. Fast, and strong. It's out of this world. The energy and care you put in this blowjob, the sloppy sounds you make with your hungry mouth, the sight of your red lips wrapped around my big cock, your naughty looks at me as you hear me moan.
"Fuck, yeah ! Emma ! It's good... Very good...You're making me so horny.. And hard... I don't know if I'll resist for long !"
The cat in you happily purrs at this big mouse he's found to play with. You stop sucking to put your nose in my balls, one hand grasping my erect cock, the other making said balls roll and get in and out your mouth.
"I like your smell, Ian, and I like how heavy these balls feel in my hand. I want you to shoot a big load in my mouth... If I release this nice cock from my clutches"
"Shit Emma. You're killing me !"
"Yes. You're going to die the little death. You're going to melt in my mouth"
You start sucking again, deep, and slow. My dick twitches in your hot mouth. You feel the big vein pulse everytime you use your tongue at it. You feel your soaked pussy getting hotter as the pleasure you're giving me rises along my shaft
"Emma. You're gonna make me cum. I'm at my limit. Your mouth... This blowjob...so good"
While you suck my meat, circling the base of my shaft with one hand, you start pushing a finger in my butthole. I open my legs to ease the way. As you feel me widening, you start anal fucking me with 2 fingers.
"Romantic...yet so naughty...You WILL cum in my mouth with my fingers in your ass !"
"Nice... touch" I heave, aroused even more by what you're doing at my butt.
My cock twitches and widen in your mouth. As you feel my orgasm coming, you insert your fingers the farther you can, you eat my dick the deeper you can.
"Emma ! I... I... So good.. CUM... CUMMING !"
You feel the salty taste of my sperm in your mouth. It's a big, long shot. You never stop fingering my ass. You take all in your mouth, eager to eat me whole, taken by lust, a strange frenzy making your pussy twitch everytime you feel my cock spurts. It seems to last forever...
"Wow Emma... Just... Wow... Thank you... So much"
You smile.
"It's only the beginning. I can't wait to see you hard again and feel your dick deep in my pussy. I'm so horny Ian !"
RE: Tales by the pond - Cath - 02-03-2017
Yeah sorry, I was bored and I wanted to do something... useful?
RE: Tales by the pond - GuyByThePond - 02-04-2017
A romance - Episode 4: secondo
"I want to tease you. A lot".
I smile. Emma's in her black lace underwear. The sight is already a tease.
"I'd like to see that".
"Ian, I love your little stories. How they make me hot. How I'm feeling special reading them. Now it's my turn to give you that. And there are so many things I'd like to try with you"
"That's a very nice thing to say Emma... You know, these stories don't come out of nowhere. You have your part in inspiring them..."
"So I'll give you some more. Just wait here."
Emma goes to her bedroom. Myself, I leave my clothes, laying naked on the sofa.
She comes back wearing a pink, crotchless fishnet. She carries Mr Rabbit and some lube.
"I'm going to masturbate in front of you, Ian. I'm going to be your own personal pornstar. I want to make you hot and hard and bulging. And then we'll make love, intensely."
She puts her things on the lower table. She's standing next to me. Then she starts to move, like the pole dancers in the game. At first, it's a bit shy. Her hands hover over her body, like molding her curves, tits, belly, bum, thigs. She plays with her hair, she slips a finger in her mouth. She looks me in the eyes, except when she checks at my dick, which is starting to rise again. Then she starts rubbing her tits at my face, her ass. She's taken by her game, and she takes me in it. I'm trying to keep my hands off.
She's got a mischievous smile.
"It's been a long time I've not felt so playful, Ian... Hmm, now, I'm going to touch myself"
She sits on the chair facing me. She puts some lube on Mr Rabbit. She spreads her legs, making them rest on the chair's armpits. She moves her basin so both her pussy and ass are offered to my eyes.
"You like the view, Ian ?"
"Yes dear. I'm getting hotter every minute."
With one hand she's fondling her lower lips, parting them so Mr Rabbit she's having in her other hand has a good access to her clit. She starts to rub the tip of the dildo on her button. She's still looking at me, wetting her red lips with her tongue. My dick twitches, which she uses as a signal to slide the Rabbit in her pussy. It goes in and out slowly at first. She closes her eyes, she starts fondling her tit, pinching at the nipple bulging through the fishnet.
It's starting to smell sex. Mr Rabbit is glistening. The view is tantalizing. My dick is hard.
Emma opens her eyes. She likes what she sees. Me, eating her with my eyes, my cock oozing precum.
"Ooooh, Ian. I'm getting reaaally horny. And I think I know a way to make you as hot as I am"
She starts rubbing her asshole with left hand, using her juices and the lube on Mr Rabbit to slide a finger, then two, smoothly in it. She's got her legs raised now, playing with both holes.
"Ian, dearest, I'd really like to have some anal sex with you now"
I come near her, get down on my knees. I lube my dick, my eyes on her fingers coming in and out of her ass, on Mr Rabbit she pushes in her pussy.
She puts her left hand on her buttcheeck, making way for me. I rub the tip of my glans at her crack, slowly pushing on her anus. I can feel how the sphincter is resisting, tightening. Emma keeps on playing with Mr Rabbit, taking deep breaths. With everyone of them, I feel her hole opening, making way for my dick.
"I'm in. It's tight, and good. I can feel Mr Rabbit pounding your pussy Emma."
I'm making slow, circular moves at first, massaging Emma from the inside with my cock.
"Oh Ian. It feels so...so exciting"
Her pussy's flooding. I have her legs in my hands, pushing deeper. She's using the dildo, enjoying her holes filled. The view is great, the feeling is great. I'm fucking Emma's ass. She's fucking herself with Mr Rabbit. We're both moaning, two wild animals in heat.
"Ian, I'm cumming, I'm cumming from your dick in my ass. I'm cumming from both holes. Fuck ! It's so fucking good !"
She squirts. A lot.
I calm myself. I'm on the verge of a powerful orgasm, but I want to feel her pussy. I let Emma rest a little. I kiss her.
"Mmmh. You didn't want to fill my naughty ass with you hot sperm ?"
"I would have liked that very much, but I want to make this moment to last a little longer. Let's go to your bed"
We move to her bedroom, exchanging kisses, laughing. Then we lay on the bed.
"Let me spoon you to pound you"
Emma does so. I slide my rock hard, nearly bursting cock in her pussy, going deep inside my lovely swedish girl.
She twitches, I throb. We kiss. I play with her tits, she plays with my dick. Our moves are synced, each of us wanting to fuse in the other.
Then it cums. A long, powerful orgasm. My shaft is trembling into Emma's pussy. I can feel my cock spraying in the hot, wet nest she's got between her legs. She welcomes it.
"Oh Ian... It's so hot. Fill me. It's so good... Please cum. Cum in me."
I'm speechless, focused at her raunchy voice, at her sweet body, at the pleasure she's giving me.
I love her.
RE: Tales by the pond - GuyByThePond - 02-04-2017
(02-02-2017, 06:21 PM)Vrook Wrote: It would be polite to speak English, when posting into a general thread, like this one here. When you post in the separate threads, in the Big World section, you're free to talk in your native language.
Or, if you decide to post in your language, it would be nice to provide a sort of translation, so that the ones who don't speak that language, can get the idea behind your post.
I'm starting a french version here : http://www.mnfclub.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=1522
I'll put there stories initially written in french. Then I'll translate them for "tales by the pond". It means you'll have different stories in both threads at the beginning, and that you'll find everything in "tales..." in the end
RE: Tales by the pond - GuyByThePond - 02-06-2017
Warning: this one is rather hardcore, as the Ann character was inspired by a BDSM friend.
Warning 2: translation is a traitor's work. I'm not very happy with the result, but rewriting the original in english would have been too much work
Ann Esia - episode 1
" Oof! Oof! Oof! "
I look at Anne. She sits on the cock of the guy, the thighs spread out to show me her pussy. The dick is big, but she impales herself without batting an eyelid. I so much fucked her... She has a sex in each hand, which she rubs vigorously.
Anne is my whore.
It is not even her name. Nobody knows it.
I found Anne on the road. She was walking on the side, under a pouring rain. My carlights lit her.
She wore a white shirt, a skirt. She might have a suit, but the jacket got lost in her accident. No big loss, because the sight of her big breasts molded by the wet shirt would have made hard a dead man. And there was a strange beauty in her dark hair stuck by the rain, the paleness of her numb complexion, the vulnerability of her situation.
"Ngh! "
Anne makes the big cock disappear in her rectum.
Anne loves feeling her asshole dilated, by a cock, a plug, anything as long as that opens her bottom.
She rubs the dicks in her hands with a doubled vigour. At this stage, she really wants to be juiced on, to feel the sperm sticking on her face, on her big tits, on her skin...
I stopped. I asked her how she felt. She was lost, I brought her back to my place.
Yes, I know, I should have driven her to the hospital, gone to the police, done good, been the good Samaritan.
But it was Anne, but it was me. A bad spell was cast on us. She remembered nothing. Who she was, where she lived, what she liked.
I took advantage of it.
"Yes! "
Anne remains impaled, waving her bottom. She arches her back, showing her dilated pussy. Her eyes begin to roll upwards. She leaves the two dicks to wank fervently with a hand, putting her fingers deep in her vulva.
The two guys go on with what Anne started, wanking their cocks a few centimeters of her face.
At the house, I suggested her to take a shower to warm herself. But she) remained apathetic.
So I undressed her.
My hands slid on the white? cool skin. My hands felt the weight of her heavy breasts, whose nipples hurled.
She was passive.
I took them in my mouth. She loved it.
I removed her panties, I slid my hand over her vulva. She loved it.
I rubbed her clit, I put fingers in her pussy, in her ass. She loved it.
She loved everything, and she squirted abundantly on my carpet.
I wanted to keep her for me.
" Ooooh! "
A powerful orgasm shakes Anne's body, making her body, her face, red. Her juices spatter abundantly from her pussy, which she rubs feverishly with her hand, her anus distended by the big cock. It looks like the show pleases the two guys wanking furiously as much as me. Anne has her mouth open, she sticks out her tongue. A first shot of sperm splashes her.
"Again ! "
She turns her dirtied face towards the other cock. The white liquid springs in big jerks, covering her tongue, her lips, her eyes.
I took her to the bathroom. I started running a hot shower. I laid bare, like her. I started rubbing her. "It's nice, sir." "For me too you know".
I was rock hard.
Noticing my swollen tail, she asked "What happens to you?"
"As it pleases me to please you, I give you a way to please yourself by making me happy, do you understand?"
She did not understand.
"Uh?"
"You have to put my cock in your mouth"
"Why ?"
"To wash it, to please me, I also washed you and made you happy"
"Okay"
"Kneel, it will be easier"
She did what I said . A real doll. She swallowed my cock without hesitation. I felt her tongue on my dick, triggering a pleasant thrill along my shaft.
"Move your head now"
The blowjob was awkward, but she did it with energy.
"Slrrp slrrp slrrp"
She were gulping my cock with application. Feeling the juice rise, I took her head in my hands.
"Don’t stop bitch !"
Waving my pelvis, I quickly filled her mouth with my cum, curiously excited by her voluntary passivity.
"Mgfff!"
She opened wide eyes when the sperm squirted at the bottom of her throat.
"Swallow everything!"
She swallowed.
Her docility was fascinating.
"You will love to make me cum ! I will make you my little whore".
She just nodded her head ...
Turn around !"
Anne changes position and straddles the man with the big cock. She welcomes with pleasure this hard member in her slutty pussy. Her ass is perfectly dilated. I get up, I open my fly and I pull out my erect cock.
While Anne impales herself, I spread her asshole. I watch for a moment her open anus. My cock stiffened. I slide it easily, and up to the guard, in her bitch in heat ass.
I brought her back to the room.
"I'll call you Anne"
"Okay"
" Say Yes master"
"Yes master"
"You know what a master is?"
"Uh ..."
"That means I'll shelter you, take care of you, give you pleasure ... Would you like it?"
"Yes ... I think ... a lot ..."
"But you will have to do things for me. Make me happy. Will you?"
"Like what ?"
"What happened in the shower for example My cock was swollen because I liked to play with your pussy ..."
"I also liked it ..."
"Exactly, and then you made me happy with your mouth ..."
She smiles like a girl to whom a doll is offered. "Oh yes, it was funny when I felt you sink into my mouth, and it made me all hot down there!"
(It's fascinating how she lights up from the inside when you talk about it). "I'll show you other things, is that alright ?" She nodded, with the mixture of seriousness and enthusiasm of the kids. At that moment I wanted to kiss her. But it's a very different story that was written ...
The double penetration is intense. I feel the huge cock of the guy fill her pussy and rub against mine through the thin anal wall. This friction and the welcoming ass of Anne make my cock reaaly hard. I pound her bluntly, hands spreading her buttocks to give me a good view on the back and forth of my sex. "Aaaah, ah, master, I feel you, it's good, take my ass again, fuck your whore’s ass!"
I made her lie on the bed. I moved to the side.
"I love your body, I love your white skin, your big breasts, your little belly, your long legs, the down on your mound of venus, the lips of your pussy"
At the same time that I quoted the different parts of her anatomy, I made her hand caress them.
"It's ... sweet, it makes you want to fly a bit"
"Yes, you can give yourself pleasure like that, but only if I agree, spread your lips and put your finger on the little button"
She began to masturbate in front of me who did not lose a crumb. Obviously, my presence at her side, the stiffening of my dick, did not leave her indifferent.
"Master, I feel warm, can you help me?"
"I can do it. You have to say you want my cock, you want to feel it in your pussy"
"I want to feel your cock in my pussy, master"
I took it. I slipped my swollen cock into her wet cunt. I spread her thighs, tightened her hips and printed a plunger to my pelvis. I could see my cock coming and going in her vagina, getting wet from her juices.
"Caress your breasts! Play with them when I take you little whore!"
She executed herself, rolling her big breasts in her white hands. It was prodigiously exciting to see her obey.
"I like it when you call me little whore"
"I'm gonna have a lot of words for you ... Bitch, slut, cunt, cumbucket, you're gonna learn to love them when I tell them"
"Now, filthy whore, we'll make you scream!"
I withdraw from the ass of my bitch.
"Slip your dick into her anus!"
Anne is raised. The guy makes her sit on his thick cock, guiding the turgescent limb with his hand. I spread the buttocks of my little slut so her ass is well filled.
"Ouch, it's big!"
"Wait a bit !"
I move Anne's buttocks. My cock is all stiff. I can’ hold it anymore, I slide my dick in her rectum. "Aaaaaiah, Master, you’re tearing my ass with your gear!"
She has tears in her eyes. At the same time, she blushes harder. Her pussy is burning. She breathes intensely, not knowing where the pain ends and where pleasure begins. I pound her anus, excited by the big cock that is already there, by the cries that I snatch from my sexual slave.
I called her all names.
I took her in all positions.
Amazon, spooning, doggy style, standing,…
Pussy, ass, mouth.
I pounded her like there is no tomorrow.
I spurted on her face.
I made her my sexual toy.
And she liked it.
Very much.
The double anal is a killer. Literally.
The ass of my bitch is violated, ravaged by the two cudgels that strive on her. We are three horny animals.
The two wankers laugh.
"What a pounding !"
"Did you hear how she squeaks? Still, the sow stands it!"
"A hell of a bitch he's got"
I am proud of my slave. She excites me. She excites men. She bends to my desires. She offers herself entirely. She loves cum and cocks.
"Pound me harder !" My balls go up, the sperm goes up along my tense shaft.
"I'll, we'll fill your ass up Anne!"
I discharge strongly into the anus of my slave.
"Yeah, master, I feel your sperm!"
When I retire, the sperm flows from the anus that is still distended by the horse's dick of the other guy. I observe for a moment the comings and goings of the big cock, coated with my sperm.
"Fill her with your cum".
"Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah!"
I see the vein on the big cock pulsing.
"Ngggnnn"
The other guy discharges.
Anne arches her back, sticks her tongue out, draws her fingers in the sheets.
She squirts heavily... She pants against the guy with the huge cock.
I draw closer to her, takes her chin in my hand.
"Look at me !"
She's half groggy. But she distinguishes me through the veil of pleasure.
"Master ..." she whispers in a thick voice.
RE: Tales by the pond - GuyByThePond - 02-06-2017
Kiss Fu Master
She's lithe, supple, and sweating. She inhales deeply, then she goes "blowing in the wind", "my sole tastes good", "I love the weight of your balls", "rubbing the mounds of glory" and "stealing your breath always". Now she should go "grab your hair", but it is SelIan... She makes a "Your shaft is mine" move.
I whistle approvingly.
Then I get on the tatami. I make a thai vai (*) at her, joining my hands over my head I bow. She flashes a smile, because I saluted her as a master, then she blows a killing kiss, because she knows me.
I dive on the left and roll on myself to get up in one swift move.
"No foreplay ? You know better, dear... Some sweet words are a much more efficient way to break guards than any cold, "insta kill" maneuver"
"I know you follow the "heart & soul" path, dear. But I like to get you off guard with a "just feelin' hot" move when it works..."
She passes her tongue over her lips, narrowing her eyes to throw me a "I smell like wet, hot sex" look. I counter by flashing a rose out of my yukata I send at her face. She grabs it in her mouth, make a whirl on herself and spit it.
"I don't feel like dancing tango with you, dear Ian"
"Then I'll find other ways to make you fall in my arms, dear SelIan"
We start circling one another, looking for an opening.
All of a sudden, she's on me. She tries "pinching my nipple", then "grabbing my cock" and finally "rubbing her ass at my crotch" in a flawless kata. I step back with her every attack, anticipating a move to "pull my head at her neck"... Then she uses her leg, spinning down on herself to make me fall. I've been fainted ! All I can do is a backflip to dodge the low kick, hoping to get far enough not to be caught by what's coming next... It's "Talk to my hand" ! She has used her momentum to flash her palm at my face. It ends a millimeter short, touching my nose.
"You've improved your moves, dear !"
She smiles again.
"I missed you, dear".
That's my opening. I talk and move at once.
"Wind to down your guard !"
I clasp my hands. The thunder move makes her yukata open wide.
"Earth to make me strong !"
I close on her. She tries to fence me off with her arms, but she's off balance and I barely feel her punch.
"Fire to tame your heart !"
I'm in her guard. I lock her arms, holding her tight.
"And water, for a melting kiss..."
My mouth is on her lips. They open as my tongue swirls in. I can feel her bare, soft bosom against mine. She's breathing hard as we're kissing in a tight embrace.
Then we break up and salute each other.
SelIan is smiling again. "Next time, you'll fall and have me on top, dear"
"There's nothing I'd like more, dear"
(*) Yes, Kiss Fu comes from Thaïland (**). It requires a "Sanuk" way of thinking. And I'm a big fan of Tony Jaa ;-)
(**) Thaïland is a wonderful country, one of the most interesting "East meets West" place I know (it's the "balanced" one, Japan and Philippines being the 2 extremes). Besides, it's one of the best cooking in the world. If you want to catch a glimpse of it (other than going there), read "Dragon's fin soup" (novellas - "fiddling for water buffaloes" is hilarious - by S. P. Somtow) and the "Bangkok night" series (thriller by John Burdett).
RE: Tales by the pond - Cath - 02-06-2017
What do you mean by two extremes?! #triggered #not